Feedback on a New F...
 
Notifications
Clear all

Feedback on a New Forensics Website

21 Posts
11 Users
0 Reactions
2,763 Views
jaclaz
(@jaclaz)
Illustrious Member
Joined: 18 years ago
Posts: 5133
 

However I did have a look over the website for grammar errors and used a spell checker so in theory they should all be fixed now.

Well, NO
http//www.firstforforensics.com/investigation/famous-forensic-cases/

Without computer forensics existence, Dennis Rader ma

n

y have possibly gone on to kill 10’s if not 100’s of other innocent people and with the police and attorney’s in agreement, it was decided there was enough evidence to suggest Dennis was guilty of serial killing and was sentenced behind bars indefinitely.

No spell checker will find that, BUT it was already pointed to your attention specifically.
And still the whole sentence makes little sense, besides the already mentioned lapalissade, as (to me at least) it seems that the guy was sentenced by "the police and attorney's in agreement" 😯 .

If you want another one, just a few lines below

On one occasion though he was successful, he

done

this by gaining their personal information such as her address and even her own name.

jaclaz


   
ReplyQuote
Page 3 / 3
Share: